Final Clip

Evaluation Question 7

Evaluation Question 6

Evaluation Question 5

Evaluation Question 4

Evaluation Question 3

Question 3 evaluation by Isin Vedat from CoombeMedia

Evaluation Question 2

Evaluation Question 1

Sound Analysis

       
   

• when the production company is shown there is a fast and upbeat sound which straight away creates a sense of rapidness which could be referenced as non-diegetic sound. 
• the upbeat sound is still carrying on as we hear the cars fleeting past which becomes more frequent in order for the audience to feel as if the cars are catching up with each other.
• when the tank crashes through the lorry the sound effects are so intense as we can hear every little detail in order to understand the power of the tank and how much destruction it has caused which will effect the other cars.
• the atmosphere and style of the music changes to high pitch one tone singing voice which is simplistic as the sounds of destruction over rides this sound. It is also a form of juxtaposition between these two sounds as one is very calming and the other is complete destruction.
• when the other team of cars are aware that there is a tank approaching and ruining their plan there is no sound in order for there to be more emphasis on the intensity of the havoc that will be caused by the tank which is called diegetic sound. 

         

• initially there is a quiet guitar playing in a happy but simplistic notes being played which is called diegetic sound. 
• when the actors start talking which is referenced to diegetic sound, there is strong sound of birds to represent tranquility. 
• when she starts to read the letter the piano starts to become more distinctive but has a slightly deeper tone to the initial guitar which shows that something is changing in the mood or atmosphere in this particular moment.
• as the woman protagonist realizes that she has a new dramatic change in her life the sound becomes more vibrant and energetic in order to portray that there is a positive outcome for herself and the children at the end of the film.

Preliminary Sequence

The Preliminary Experience

• taught me how to use the camera
• to think of different and vast camera angles to use
• thinking of match on action
• how to create continuity throughout the sequence
• to form a clear story
• how to edit efficiently
• how to use adobe premier pro.

There were also many situations where we learnt from out mistakes. For example, when Akim was walking down the corridor when changing from one shot to the other it was quite obvious how his feet weren't continuous into the next shot. This then taught me the importance of continuity as it would make the audience understand the story or that scene with much more detail. Just before Akim gets up and says "I can't do this" there was a short clip of just his face in order for the audience to understand his frustration.However, I believe it would of been more effective and continuous if we carried on that shot for a little longer in order for the audience to understand the actors strong emotions at that particular time.

This experience gave the right push start and enthusiasm in order to understand what works well and what to avoid when editing or filming. 

Audience Feedback

We had an internal viewing of our opening sequence in order to gain a wider range of perspectives to see what our strongest and weakest points are within our opening sequence.

Our positive feedback:

• "Variety of creative camera angles"
• "Good transitions"
• "Narrative is clear"
• "Easy to understand"
• "Understood the genre of the film instantly"
• "Great logo"

However, we also had some negative feedback:

• "maybe too many cuts"
• "tighter cuts"
• "possible some scenes are too long"

This whole experience assisted us as a group to assist on particular areas which we were unaware of to be improved. As we watch the clip over and over again we are sometimes unable to see what is right and wrong within a cut or a particular scene. Therefore, having the opportunity to have other peoples perspectives in order for us to find out what to improve and work upon helps us later on in the process. This is because we are able to tell and remember what our internal audience members requested and helped us to establish when editing or adding more scenes to the overall opening  sequence.  

Audience Profile

The genre of our opening sequence is romantic drama. There are various different guidelines of this genre, some of them being...

• portraying realistic characters and stories 
• showing a relatable setting 
• real emotions to be shown 
• a clear and precise plot. 

Research tells me that...

Teen drama from stowlson

Our opening sequence - Absence:

• The plot of the story consists of a young teenage relationship which doesn't have a happy ending. This then leaves the girl to be extremely upset and to have aspects of depression. 

• This attempted to make the story as pragmatic as possible for our target audience to understand and to be sympathetic for the female protagonist as the target audience may have first hand experience about how she is feeling.

• We tried to make the setting, costume and make up to be as realistic and relatable to our audience as much as possible.

• As a group we concluded that our target audience for Absence would be female between the ages of 14-20 year old. This is because our film has many codes and conventions of a Romantic Drama film which is mostly attracted by this target audience which we had picked. This was done by the setting, location, camera angles, clothing, make up etc.

Behind the scenes

Institution

Paramount Pictures Corporation (commonly known as Paramount Pictures) is a film and television production/ distribution studio o, consistently ranked as one of the largest (top-grossing) film studios. Research has taught me that there have been a wide range of romantic films that have been distributed and produced and are extremely successful. Here are some examples of this:
Titanic (Paramount Picture) $600,743,440
Runaway Bride (Paramount Picture) $152,149,590
What Women Want (Paramount Picture) $182,805,123

I believe that Paramount Pictures would be most suitable and the concept would be appealing for our opening sequence. Research has taught me that this company has been intrigued and have produced and distributed romance/break up films. This means that due to our opening sequence having a unique selling point this would then make the production company very intrigued and wanting to be a part of the completely different style of a break up film.

Genre Research

This film is all about love and staying single and the struggle of breaking up but learning how to love someone else. This film is relatable to our opening sequence as it is not a typical romance and love story it has some form of difference but still has the strong aspect of  love and romance. Therefore, as this is a recent film this an important and significant example that we could use in order to gain stronger knowledge and gain an understanding about what has been included in a romance film and whether to add anything new to our opening sequence.





This is a more dated film but it still has a stronger influence and correlation between our opening sequence. It has roughly the same story line in the sense that a break up has occurred and we are able to see what the consequences are about the break up an how each and every individual is different in the way that they cope with the break up. We are able to receive a vast amount of ideas from using this clip as it enables us as a group to get in the mind set of a break up which then would enable us to form creative ideas for our opening sequence.


What  break up film would involve...

• relationship between man and women 
• at least 1 friend giving advice 
• how they are both coping with the break up 
• the emotions being very strong 
• maybe 1 person that is moving on

I believe that these are the stereotypical version and aspects of what they include in a break up film. This is exactly the aspects that we want to distance ourselves from so that it can be more unique and not so stereotypical of what is going to happen next in the film. Due to adding features that would make it unique it would target a wider and different audience that are willing to see a different style and attempt to take away the stereotypes of a break up film.

Art Of The Title Research

http://www.artofthetitle.com/title/sita-sings-the-blues/

Whilst the opening sequence is starting off and the title of the producers or production companies are occurring, the font and the style is extremely simplistic. The writing consists of plain white text with the font being "arial". As the opening sequence carries on we get a sense of what the style of the film or programme maybe about as it has many Asian connotations eg. the distinctive clothing. There then seems to be some sort of explosion where the title is hidden behind the explosion as we get a slight image of what the title may look like. As the explosion disappears the image of the title appears in very typical Asian style writing eg. with the line connecting all the letters at the top and the swirling of the longer letters. The colour of the writing is white as the background is black which makes it stand out even more. As the title drifts closer to the camera it becomes more clear that the colour of the title changes from white to a bright blue. The title then drifts closer and closer to the camera angle which then leads the title to disappear. After this the same procedure occurs with the cast and the actors on preview. They appear to be initially white but as they come more closer they become bright blue which then leads the title to disappear. By having the title in the bright blue colour it relates to the context of the title "Sita Sings The Blues" which then provides a strong connotation for the audience. By also having the style of the writing in an Asian form assists the audience to understand exactly what the film maybe about and to give some brief knowledge about the background of the film / programme. The music also coincides and reaffirms the Asian style of the film / programme.


http://www.artofthetitle.com/title/300/

Straight away it starts off with the director in a very simplistic font with the background being black and the writing in the distinctive red colour as there is also a form of splatter of blood. There is then an image change from the black background to a form of a violent war scene with people dying or getting killed. The opening credits of the director, producer, production companies then carry on with this same format, red coloured writing, blood splattered and an image of a war scene between each name. As the opening sequence comes to an end the title "300" appears in a different form of font. The title writing seems to be written via actual blood itself. By having the writing in a red colour it signifies war, death and blood very symbolically. This would then mean that a lot of people were killed and it seemed to be a very gory task for the soldiers to uphold. The way in which the blood splaterring was presented in every image was portrayed gave the sense that all the people that was stated on the opening sequence had been stated to have died or past away in the war. This then informs us as the audience that  a lot of people had died whether it be intentionally or non intentionally. The music strong coincides with the style of the film as the music has many aspects of what war in those times may sound like eg. the swords, horses, men calling for help.


http://www.artofthetitle.com/title/casino/

We straight away see the text of the producers, directors, editors, production companies etc portrayed on a black background with old American style 1980's font. A small section of the film  beings to play whilst having a voiceover giving a few ideas of what the rest of the film may consider. There then seems to be some form on explosion which then captivates the audience and leaving them on a cliff hanger and leaving them to think what might happen next. The name of the actors appear on the screen with the same font as they initially had before they showed a small section of the film. Whilst the names of the actors are on screen there is a man flying in slow motion of just his silhouette to show the continuity from the explosion that had just occurred. Once the silhouette has disappearred the title had appeared and the background had changed to a red colour with the aspect of flashing white lights. By having the font in the old American style it provides the audience some aspect of where this film maybe set in or might have some correlation about it. By having the background change when the title appears it gives the audience a form of contrast and to help them gain more attention about what the film is called and how the background could have a major influence on what the film maybe about. The music has a major sense of juxtaposition as it is clear that an explosion has just happened meaning that someone is either dead or is severely hurt. However, the music has the aspect of opera which is seen to be a tranquil and peaceful style of music which is not the atmosphere of what this opening sequence consists of.